The idea itself is not bad (although I think you’re being a little too enthusiastic
), but I have to say it really hurt my eyes reading this. You need to learn to put spaces.
After a comma, put a space. Writing like this,would be not only annoying,but wrong.
After a dot, an exclamation mark (!) or a question mark, you should also put a space. Okay? Great!
Both before and after brackets (<<these things>>) there should also be a space, however only from the outside. If you put a space on the inside ( like this ) that would be wrong too.
Also, there is a great button on your keyboard called Enter or Return. It makes a new line, so you can finish a paragraph and make a small space between that paragraph and the next one. This would make your post look nicer, and be divided instead of one big wall of text. This is also important to use when you make a list.
So here is what we learned today:
1. put spaces after commas, question marks, exclamation points and dots.
2. Divide your post into pargraphs if it is big, and use new lines if you make a list.
I hope you will listen to what I told you and use it in your future posts.
Have a nice day.